Friday, February 11, 2011

2/10/11

Nicole went to the bowling alley. she describe in very vivid detail everything she saw when there. she talk about the girl at the front desk and also about the manager hank that came over. she sat behind some people bowling and describe how they bowled and there characteristic that defined them. she decided to go for a stroll on the other side where there was no people she noticed how the attendants clump people together so they can keep the light off on one side. all in all she used every good detail and description on the world around her and did a good job analyzing all the characters before her.

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